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Need Help with this Business Letter for soliciting funds/ (Please provide constructive Crit.)?
January 1st, 2007 Teen Empowerment Outreach Center (TEOC) 123 Abin Road, Steet, Bucksville North Carolina, 23405 Office: 252.331.333.2233 Fax: 252.223.1515 Cornell.Robertson@yahoo.com John Harrison Incorporated TEOC is a non-profit Life Skills Service organization that provides a holistic and comprehensive approach to help at-risk teenagers obtain a high school diploma or a GED degree and enroll in a university or technical/vocational school program. In addition, TEOC services will include personal, cultural, and career development for teenagers in an environment that is safe, nurturing and supportive in a live-in campus style environment. TEOC’s comprehensive approach is threefold. We provide (CEC) Counseling, Education and Cultural Exposure. Please review our flyer for additional details about our program. TEOC is in the process of purchasing a 3 million dollar facility located on a 5 acre campus. We are seeking donations for donations for a down payment for our building fund. Thank you in advance for your consideration, as TEOC seeks to reduce the rate of teenage homelessness, crime and delinquency in the Greater Greenville, North Carolina area. Respectively Cornell Robertson, MAED Founder & Executive Director
Public Comments
- start by getting the actual NAME of the contact you will be sending the letters to. more personal - will get more attention. your paragraphs are each one sentence. I think the most you need is 3 paragraphs, so combine a couple. It should END with thank you in advance for your consideration. And it's RespectFULLY, not respectively. TEOC is a non-profit Life Skills Service organization that provides a holistic and comprehensive approach to help at-risk teenagers obtain a high school diploma or a GED degree and enroll in a university or technical/vocational school program. TEOC’s comprehensive approach is threefold. We provide (CEC) Counseling, Education and Cultural Exposure. TEOC seeks to reduce the rate of teenage homelessness, crime and delinquency in the Greater Greenville, North Carolina area. Services offered by TEOC will include personal, cultural, and career development for teenagers in an environment that is safe, nurturing and supportive campus style environment. TEOC is in the process of purchasing a 3 million dollar facility located on a 5 acre campus which will accommodate at-risk teenagers in residential units. We are currently seeking donations toward a down payment for our building fund. Please review the enclosed brochure for additional details about our program. If you should have any questions after reviewing it, I would be happy to address them personally. My business card is enclosed. Thank you in advance for your consideration. Respectfully, or you can state that "I will contact you within the next week to address any concerns..." but if you say that then MAKE SURE you follow up and KEEP YOUR WORD.
