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Your advertisement on monster.com caught my attention for the entry-level position that is available at Robert HalfFinance & Accounting. I am actively seeking employment with firms in the Tampa area. My courses in investments, finance and business have given me a solid base upon which I plan to build to build my career. The opportunity presented in this ad is very interesting, and I believe that my strong technical experience and education will make me an excellent candidate for this position. The key strengths that I possess for success in this position include: •I have experience in general ledger, financial statements, and QuickBooks. •I strive for continued excellence •I provide exceptional contributions to customer service for all customers I greatly appreciate you taking the time to review my qualifications and experience. I hope that you'll find my experience, interests, and character intriguing enough to warrant a face-to-face meeting, as I am confident that I could provide value to you and your customers as a member of your team. I can be reached at my cell phone at (

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  1. Parag. 1 you repeated to build. parag.3 I would say face to face interview.or warrant an interview. and, I can be reached on my cell phone at
  2. Your advertisement on Monster.com caught my attention for the entry-level position available at Robert Half Finance & Accounting. I am actively seeking employment with firms in the Tampa area. I feel my courses in Investing, Finance, and Business have given me a solid base upon which I plan to build my career. I am very interested in the position mentioned and I believe that my strong technical experience and education will make me an excellent candidate for this position. The key strengths that I possess for success in this position include: •Experience in General Ledger, Financial Statements, and QuickBooks. •Exceptional contributions to customer service for all customers •I strive for continued excellence I greatly appreciate you taking the time to review my qualifications and experience. I hope that you'll find my experience, interests, and character intriguing enough to warrant a face-to-face meeting. I am confident that I could provide value to you and your customers as a member of your team. I can be reached at ( Good Luck
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