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can someone edit my essay? thank you so much English is my second language I am learning?
I have volunteered to take care of children at school meetings, volunteer at a preschool and an after-school program and at the children’s ministry. I have experiences the joy of working with children and learning about them as a volunteer. Teachers’ as will as parents’ have always suggested me to go into the educational career. I have considered a career in education as a preschool teacher. A preschool teacher introduces three to six year old children to school A preschool teacher has a collage education, training, have many duties, responsibilities, work environment and a good salary and benefits. First of all, a preschool teacher has a collage and training education. A Certificate of Achievement as Child Development including study in psychology as well as family and training in helping children families cope with crisis. Communication skills and learn about issues affecting families and children, but training starts when seeking work with children as teacher aides. I think that the training to be a preschool teacher will cost from Degrees offered Certificates and Associate required fees $780 full-time, $26 per unit part-time. Secondly, Preschool teachers have many duties, responsibilities, work environment. Preschool teachers provide activities to stimulate in children growth in language, social, and motor sills, such as learning to listen to instruction, playing with others, and using playing equipment. A typical day in a preschool is filled with arts and crafts, music, language and numbers games, and various other fun things, like blocks and my favorite cutting out construction paper shapes and free play to help children develop social skills. Every activity gives children a learning opportunity. Thirdly, the salary for a preschool teacher depends on experiences, level of education, and the school and center where the preschool teacher works. I think that the salary starts about $ 2, 800 per month/ $ 34,700 per year. Public schools usually have all the benefits, insurance and retirement. I think that the rewards are priceless, because children’s smiles, hugs and pays off any job that one has a passion for. In summary, I will keep on volunteering at church with the children ministry and take all the courses in early childhood at the community college to receive a Certificate of Achievement as Child Development teacher and all the required classes for an Associate Degree. Take at less 12 units and get my teaching licenses through child development program.
Public Comments
- a lot of mistakes at the beginning didn't finish reading. need to reword first sentence and check spelling do spell check on you computer.
- NEVER SAY "IN SUMMARY" 3rd graders do that
- Paragraph 1: I have experienced the joys Teachers as well as students have always advised me to go for a career in education. Paragraph 2: The spelling is college, not collage has many duties
- Many of us can probably edit it for you. But you will still not learn a good way of doing it for yourself. The best advice I ever received on editing and correcting my work was to work backwards. Take each sentence from the end to the beginning as if it were standing on its own. Can it? Is it properly written as a sentence on its own. Are all the words spelled correctly, capitalized, etc... When you look at your paper from beginning to end, you tend to loose yourself because YOU know what you are saying so you will miss a lot of things others won't. But when you look at it backwards- you will see it from our eyes. Then ask someone to edit your work.
- I attempted to edit this for you. I found many grammatical errors, but since English isn't your native language, I didn't want to completely change the essay for you. I left your words intact, but made it a bit more literate. See what you think: I have volunteered to take care of children at school meetings, preschool, after-school programs and at the children's ministry. I have experienced the joy of working with children and learning about them as I volunteer. Teachers, as well as parents, suggest that I go into the field of education. I have, in fact considered a career in education as a preschool teacher. The duties of a preschool teacher include introducing three to six year old children to school. A preschool teacher has a college education, training, and has many duties, and responsibilities. They have a great work environment and a good salary with benefits. First, preschool teachers require a Certificate of Achievement in Child Development including study in psychology, and training in helping children and families cope with crisis. Communication skills and learning about issues affecting families and children are necessary, but training starts when seeking work as a teacher's aide. Training to be a preschool teacher will depend on the level of schooling required. This varies by the degrees offered, such as: certificates or an associate degree, all requiring fees ranging from $780 full-time to $26 per unit part-time. Secondly, Preschool teachers have many duties and responsibilities in regards to their work environment. Preschool teachers provide activities to stimulate children's growth in language, social, and motor sills, such as: learning to listen to instruction, playing with others, and using play equipment. A typical day in a preschool is filled with arts and crafts, music, language and numbers games, and various other fun things. Construction paper shapes and free play help children develop social skills. Every activity gives children an opportunity to learn. Thirdly, the salary for a preschool teacher depends on experience, level of education, and the school and center where the teacher works. Salaries range from about $2,800 per month to $34,700 per year. Public schools usually have benefits, insurance and retirement. The rewards are priceless, because children’s smiles and hugs pay off any job that one has a passion for. In summary, I will keep volunteering at church with the children's ministry and take all the courses in early childhood at my local community college to receive a Certificate of Achievement as a Child Development teacher, as well as the required classes for an Associates Degree. It will require at least 12 units to get my teaching licenses through these programs. But once I am finished, I can start my career as a preschool teacher.
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